Here is a close-up. I am also so pleased with his handwriting. It has really improved this year.
The whole family turned out for the event.
And for your reading pleasure, here is a transcription of the entire story.
Andrew
February 9, 2007
My Whale
One sunny day at the edge of Heartville a big wave rose out of the water. From my window I saw a whale spring out of the water. I quickly got my swimming suit and ran outside.
I jumped into the water. It felt cold and damp. I put on my goggles and I held my nose. Then I put my head in the water and I looked around. I saw the whale. I quickly swam to it. Then I got on it. It was soft and gray. It spun around.
I wanted to keep him but how can I fit the whale into my house. I thought for a minute, but I remembered. I was riding a whale. So I quickly held my breath. Then I had an idea. I got off the whale. I would build a wall around the whale so he couldn't get away.
First, I got some blocks. Second, I got some glue. Then I went back in to the water. I went very far into the ocean. I set the blocks down and glued them together. I looked around.
I said to myself, "What a very fine swimming pool".
Now I can ride my whale whenever I want. So I jumped on my pet whale and rode him for two hours.
When I got out, I said to myself, "What a fine job."
2 comments:
A great story indeed. Wonderful writing Andrew! We can't wait for your next published story.
Hi Andrew
Great job on the story! I love it! Keep writing....I look forward to reading more of your stories :)
Auntie Mag
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